Friday, 2 March 2012

Homework Task

Hello Year 5

Homework task:

Write three sentences on our blog. Your first sentence should include accurate direct speech. Your second sentence should include personification. Your final sentence should include a simile. The subject of your sentences can be anything that interests you. Post your homework to this blog post.

Remember to leave your first name when you comment. Miss Sawicki

20 comments:

  1. Maisha's homework

    Direct speech: Richard asked Helen "why don't we go out for a meal?"

    Personification: The leaves danced to the floor.

    Simile:Life is a roller-coaster which everyone has to go through.

    Done by Maisha

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    1. Direct Speech: "IT'S MY 17'th BIRTHDAY!" shouted Jenna happily.

      Personification: The lighning bolt danced through the sky.

      Simile: Jenna ran as fast as a racing car

      By Zainab

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  2. Direcy speech: ' today is the big day!' mentioned Emma happily.

    personification: the wind walked through the trees.

    simile: Emma was as fast as a cheater.

    aysha

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  3. Direct speech: "Today I am going to have a race in the olyimpics," exclaimed John as he ran aroun the race track.

    Personifacation: The wind howled rapidly as Johns cap flew away.

    Simile: John was as quick as a flash.

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  4. Direct speech:
    "Give me my ball back!" yelled the boy loudly.

    Personification:
    The powerful wind kicked the green, weak leave away.

    Simile:
    The light bulb was as bright as the dazzling sun.

    By Uzayr

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    Thanks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  5. Direct speech: "Today I am going to have a race in the olyimpics," exclaimed John as he ran aroun the race track.

    Personifacation: The wind howled rapidly as Johns cap flew away.

    Simile: John was as quick as a flash.
    By Umar

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  6. Direct speech:
    "Stop that man!" Yelled the police man angrily.

    Personification:
    The gloomy cloud was crying to death.

    Simile:
    He ran as fast as a cheater.

    By Sufyaan

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  7. "The school will be closed for two days,"the Principal will say soon.

    The tornado pranced across the field and wiped away everything in its path.

    As hairy as an ape

    From Oliver Grand
    P.S Easy as a eating.

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  8. Your legs are swollen, " I said to grandfather.

    The lightning lashed out with anger.

    As fat as a hippo.

    Frank
    P.S. As easy as ABC

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  9. ''It is my birthday screamed emily exitedly''.

    the corals was dancing in the fresh,blue,deep sea

    the pourcipines are as sharp asa thorn

    By fahim
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    1. "it is christmas shouted Nahida exitedly"
      The street lights where baring their yellow teeth.
      The monsters face was red like devil



      By Radia Aktar

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  10. Well done! Some great sentences already! I particularly like your personification sentences. Very impressive!

    Miss Sawicki

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  11. Kashf's Homework!
    1. "Who ate the last of the cookies?" Moaned Oliver angrily.
    2. The leaves danced on the tree's branches as the wind blew.
    3. The stars were as bright like bulbs in the sky
    :P

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  12. Nailah's Homework!
    1.
    "Everybody be quite!" Shouted miss Sawicki at the whole class
    2.
    The coral reef danced and swayed around in the antarctic pure, fresh sea!

    3.
    The coral reef was as colourful as a bueatiful rainbow!

    Nailah

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  13. "It is Eid shouted Naheeda"
    The street lights bare their yellow teeth
    The monsters face was red like devil

    Radia Aktar

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  14. 1.I am as cunning as a fox.
    2.The wind whistled gracefully.
    3."What a beautiful day,"replied ismaeel obnoxious.

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  15. 1."who ate the cake?" Oliver angrily exclaimed.

    2.The fish danced in the sea.

    3.My baby sister is as cute as a button.

    Humza

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  16. Shakira's homework!

    1. "I love singing!" Tasnim cried singing with no shame to the class proudly.
    2.The first rays if sunshine tiptoed through the meadow.
    3.Nailah was as loyal as an apostle.
    By Shakira

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  17. Direct Speech
    "Can I please be in The Five Find Outer club"
    Personification
    The first rays if sunshine tiptoed through the meadow.
    Simile
    The lion roared as thunder.
    By:Myala

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  18. Direct speech
    "Would you let me have a pass to join your club please?"
    Personification
    "The mouse danced gracefully as the wind blew gently"
    Simile
    "The wind blew hard like 99 million fans

    By Tyla

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