As I approached the coral reef, a feeling of niceness swept over me. I had never imagined this under water world would be so nice. I got closer and closer to the nice coral. The reefs looked nice. What a nice sight! I swam on, through the good coral reefs, until I reached a tunnel of rocks. I saw turtles swimming through the current. They were as green as a penguin! I saw crabs walking across the ocean floor. I also saw fish. The fish swam through the nice waves. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw an oyster opening to show a pearl. I swam over and took the pearl out of the oyster. I would treasure it forever as a reminder of my journey. I could not believe how nice the great barrier reef was.
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As I approached the coral reef, a feeling of likeability swept over me. I had never imagined this under water world would be so magnificent. However, I got closer to the beautiful coral reef. As well as that the coral reefs sway in the distance. What a outstanding sight! I carried on swimming, through the beautiful reefs.There was a tunnel of rocks.I saw turtles
ReplyDeleteflying gracefully. They were as green as grass. Crabs, which were walking on the ocean floor, crawled into the sand.Also I saw a colourful fish swimming in the cool and relaxing waves. Out of the corner of my eyes, I saw a oyster. My heart pounded with joy! I grabbed the pearl out of the oyster. I would treasure it forever as a reminder of my journey. I enjoyed the great barrier reef!
By Maisha
As I approached the beautiful coral reef,a feeling of happiness swept over me.I never imagined the underwater world would be so magnificent and beautiful.When I got closer and closer to the terrific coral.The reefs swayed in the glowing distance.It was as bright as the sky.I swam on through the dazzling reefs until I reached a tunnel of rocks.I saw bright green turtles swimming through the ocean current.They were as green as grass.I saw colourful crabs glide across the ocean floor.I also saw fat fish as fat as an elephant.The fish swam through the heavy waves.At the corner of my eyes I saw a dazzling,bright oyster opening to reveal a bright and purple perfect pearl that could be worth millions.I would treasure it forever as the remainder of my underwater trip.I couldn't believe how great the Great Barrier Reef was.
ReplyDeleteAs I approached the coral reef,a feeling of amazment swept over me. I had never imagined this under water world woud be so breathtaking and unblievable. However i got closer to the oustanding coral reef. as well as that the coral reef swayed moderatly in the distance. What a remarkable sight! I carried on swimming, through the beautiful reefs which were as marvelous and magnificent. There was a tunnel of rocks, which was as crumbly as a cheesecake,that was long. I saw turtles with scales that were rough as rock flying and gliding in the oceon spray. also there was Crabs that scutteled proudlyon the dry sand. After that i saw olourful fish that were as colourful as a rainbow swimming in the cool breeze out of the corner of my eye I saw a precious pure white pearl in the distance! My heart pounded with pleasure and joy! I grabbed straight for the pearl I would treasure it forever as a reminder of my journey. I loved my Great Barrior Reef Adventure!
ReplyDeleteAs I approached the coral reef, a feeling of excitement swept over me. I have never imagined this under water world would be so eye catching. I got closer and closer to the amazing coral. The reefs looked beautiful."What a nice sight!"I thought to myself. I swam on, through the excellent coral reefs, until I reached a tunnel of raged rocks. I saw some turtles,which were as green as grass, swimming through the current. some crabs were walking across the ocean floor and snapping their claws.SNAP!SNAP!Also I saw fish as bright the sun. The fish swam through the gorgus waves. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw an oyster opening to show a pearl. I swam over and took the pearl out of the oyster. I would treasure it forever as a reminder of my journey. I could not believe how nice the great barrier reef was.
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As I approahed the coral reef, which danced beneath the dazzling, vast, deep blue Ocean, a wave of niceness swept over me. Never in my life had I imagined this would be the most beautiful thing I would ever see in my life.
ReplyDeleteAs I swam through the rich and proud coral reef it's colourful beauty and sense of happiness, courage and bravery gave me the feeling that this coral reef was special. Something about it made me glisten happily, something about it made me feel happy, not afraid to scream out to the world, not afraid to do anything.
I could see a group of fishes that were swirling in circles like a soft tornado passing by, not hurting anyone, not doing anything, I felt as if the coral reef was the reasopn why a stormy, dangerous and horiific tornado did not cause any damage was because of how innocent and magnificent the coral reef was.
Sown beneath on the sandy surface of the ocean laid an absolutely amazing oyster which contained an expensive, rich and pretty pearl which made me even more happier.
As I swam out of the coral reef I was astonished by the mangnificent veiw which stood right in front of my eyes, “wow” I said to myself. A view so beautiful, just swept me of my feet. I felt as if I was dancing along with them underwater, in the dazzling, vast, deep blue ocean. And who knows tomorrow may be the day where I dance with the coral reef…
By Umar
As I approached the coral reef, a feeling of congeniality swept over me. I had never imagined this underwater world would be so dreamy. I got closer and closer to the colourful coral reefs. The reefs look so glorious. What a magical sight! I swam on, through the gentle swaying coral reefs, until I reached a dark tunnel of rocks. Then the most magnificent assemblage of creatures caught my eye, it was turtles gliding through the current. They were as green as an emerald touching the sun. After that magnificent sight a crowd of crabs were scattering along the ocean floor. There was a massive shoal of different and colourful kind of fishes; the fishes swam through the calm, gentle waves. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw a lovely oyster opening up a shimmering pearl, as I was going to get it a group of dolphins came swimming by singing a harmony song, I was first breath taken of the oyster but I am more contented as I ever have been in my entire life now! I thought to myself and whispered out load to everyone that I would treasure it forever. I could not believe how breathtaking the barrier reef was!
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As I approched the coral reef, a wave of happiness washed over me. I never imagined it would be amazing. The feeling was nothing like any other feeling in the world. Your mind would just be amazed of what you can see. I got closer and closer to the wonderful life of the sea. The I started to swim and there was LOTS to see. There was the glorious corals reefs swaying side to side and the colorful fish swiming gently. You would'nt belive canything you see! You can also see the dolphins singing as sweet as angels. But then, at the corner of my eye I saw a chest with the key in it. I opened the chest and there was old objects from the past. The objects were as old as you ansestors. I would treasure these objects forever and keep them safe.
DeleteBy Zainab Ali
As I approched the coral reef,a feeling of lovlynees swept over me.I have never imagind this under water world would be so beautiful.I got really close to the pointy coral that was spiky like a pineapple.I saw some tiny turtles shouting out my name!I also saw snappy crabs.Barrier reef was the best.I will all ways remember this day!
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As i approched for the shimmering coral reef, a felling of happyness swept over me. I had never imagined this lovley under water world will be that beautiful. However i got very closer to the dazzling coral reef it swayed beautiful under the water like a dazzling star. The coral reef swayed from the distance as it was dancing like the moon it shone like a little angel. I saw a huge turtle swam over me it was amazing i follwed the amazing creature next i saw a colurful fish it glided through the coral reef it was amazing. I saw a crab which was green it pinched me on the leg i swam underneath and got the beautiful pearl from the oyster. I would treasure it forever as a reminder of my journey. I enjoyed my amazing barrier reef journey. SOHAIL
ReplyDeleteAs i approchaed the beautiful coral reef,a relaxing wave had swept over me.I never thought the water world to be this nice.However i had got closer to the coral reef wich was swaying gentally, while the ocean whiselted gracefully but the depthes of the ocean groaned.Also i saw a dolphin playing happily.As well as that the fish scales felt like snakes bumpy scales.I would never forget that exquizite day.
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As I approached the coral reef, a feeling of happiness swept over me.I had never imagined this under water world would be so beautiful.I got closer to the coral reef.The coral reef looked amazing.What a great sight! I swam on, through the soft coral reefs, until I reached deep a tunnel of rocks.I saw green dazzling turtles gliding through the current. They were as green as grass! I saw crabs walking across the blue ocean floor. I also saw colourful fish. The fish swam through the vast waves. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw an oyster opening to show a shiny pearl.The pearl was as shiny as the stars. I swam over and took the shiny pearl out of the oyster. I would treasure it forever as a reminder of my journey. I could not believe how magnificent the great barrier reef was.
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I aproched to the lovely coral reef,wich were magnificent,and i went towards them to see them from close because from far i could not see them.Then i saw the beautiful fish, which were colourful, were swaying through the vast waves. then I saw a shiny pearl.
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As i approach the coral reefs, a feeling of happiness swept over me. I had never imagined this under water world would be so beatiful. I got closer to the reef. The coral reef looked amazing. What a great sight! I swam on, though the soft coral reefs, until I reached deep a tunnel of rocks.I saw green dazzling turtles gliding through the current. They were as green as grass! I saw crabs walking across the blue ocean floor. I also saw colourful fish. The fish swam through the vast waves. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw an oyster opening to show a shiny pearl.The pearl was as shiny as the stars. I swam over and took the shiny pearl out of the oyster. I would treasure it forever as a reminder of my journey. I could not believe how magnificent the great barrier reef was.
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As I approached into swaying coral reef, a feeling of joy ness flew over me. I had never imagined water world would be like this it is as nice as the God. As I got closer to there lovely coral reef. The coral reefs was swaying as nice as a baby's cotton. It was a great sight!!! I was still carrying on through the soft and beautiful, until I reached a deep deep tunnel full of grey rocks. I saw grass what is as green as turtles leaping through the the current. They was as green as a green screen! As I was swimming deeper deeper i saw blood crabs walking across the deep blue ocean floor. As well as that I saw magnificent colorful fishes swimming deeper than me. As the colorful fishes swam through the huge and vast waves. Out of the corner of my blue as the sky eye. I saw an oyster starring right at me opening to show a shiny pearl. The pearl was as shiny as can be and as bright as the moon. As I was swimming I crabbed it with my fierce hands out of the oyster. I would treasure it forever as a reminder of my journey.I could not believe how magnificent the great barrier reef was.
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ReplyDeleteAs I approached the coral reef, which danced, peace and calm swept over me. I had never imagined how this vast, exquisite water world would be. I went as close as I could to the soft coral reef. It was so unblievably beautiful. I was so exhilerated. What a mezmorizing sight! The sea was bubbling.
Slowly I swam quickly, through the swaying coral reefs. Out of the very corner of my petit eye I saw a rock as heavy as a sofa. Starring unbelievably I saw green turtles swimming through the current. I saw a clicky crab moving slowly.
Despite the fact, I saw fish swimming through the depths of the runny water. With joy, I saw an oyster opening to show a pearl.
Peeking happily, I took the pearl out of the rock solid oyster.
I will keep it fovever! I could not believe how wonderful the great barrier reef was. After 1 hour ... I melted under the sun.
By uzayr
I got my diving gear ready, I put on my wet suit and goggles on. I stood on the ledge and leapt into the deep ocean.
ReplyDeleteSPLASH! As I approached the coral reef, a feeling of curiosity swept over me.I had never imagined this under water world would be so magnificent!I got closer to the coral reef.The coral reef looked lovely.What a addicting sight! I swam on, through the spectacular coral reefs, until I reached deep a tunnel of bumpy rocks.I saw green eye-catching turtles gliding through the current. They were as green as an emerald! I saw crabs crawling across the sandy,rocky ocean floor. Also I gazed at multi-coloured fish.The fish glided through the gentle waves. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw an oyster opening slowly to show a pearl,which glistened in the sunlight.The pearl was a star from the beautiful night sky. I dog-paddled over and cautiously snatched the shiny pearl out of the oyster. I would treasure it forever as a reminder of my journey. I could not believe how wonderful the great barrier reef was!
Kashf
As I approached the magnificent coral reef, a feeling of jolliness swept over me. I have never imagined the under water world is really nice. I got closer to the beautiful coral reef. the coral reef was amazing! what a great sight. I swam on, through the soft coral reefs, until I reached a huge tunnel of rocks. I saw glimmering turtles gliding through the current.They were as green as grass! I saw crabs walking through the coral reefs and they also were snapping along. In the mean time i saw some multi-coloured fish swimming by. the fish swam through the vast waves. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw an oyster opening to show a shiny pearl. The pearl was as shiny as the golden stars. I swam over and took a glittering pearl out of the oyster. I would treasure it forever as a reminder of my journey. I could not believe how amazing the great barrier reef was.
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As I approached the magnificent coral reef, a feeling of jolliness swept over me. I have never imagined the under water world is really nice. I got closer to the beautiful coral reef. the coral reef was amazing! what a great sight. I swam on, through the soft coral reefs, until I reached a huge tunnel of rocks. I saw glimmering turtles gliding through the current.They were as green as grass! I saw crabs walking through the coral reefs and they also were snapping along. In the mean time i saw some multi-coloured fish swimming by. the fish swam through the vast waves. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw an oyster opening to show a shiny pearl. The pearl was as shiny as the golden stars. I swam over and took a glittering pearl out of the oyster. I would treasure it forever as a reminder of my journey. I could not believe how amazing the great barrier reef was.
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